I'm quite OCD when it comes to grammar and punctuation, etc. So, I was stumbling through your prose. However, there is a silver lining...
Your prose follows your thought process which makes this piece a bit more personal to the reader. And, you ask a lot of questions many of us have, so you ideas are relevant.
Try honing your literary tools to express your thoughts more clearly.
Example:
"Brian function is biologically dictated..." (misspelling). "How much Catholics and Christians in the world?" (grammar).
Take your time and review your writing. I know that many writers write from the fountain of insight that seems to grace us all at a moments' notice. Still, we must remember to sit back and review what we have written, to preserve clarity and creativity.
Sta.sh
Your prose follows your thought process which makes this piece a bit more personal to the reader. And, you ask a lot of questions many of us have, so you ideas are relevant.
Try honing your literary tools to express your thoughts more clearly.
Example:
"Brian function is biologically dictated..." (misspelling).
"How much Catholics and Christians in the world?" (grammar).
Take your time and review your writing. I know that many writers write from the fountain of insight that seems to grace us all at a moments' notice. Still, we must remember to sit back and review what we have written, to preserve clarity and creativity.